Response to Project 1 Critique- Dana Hatchett

I felt like the critique was helpful in terms of  how to tell a story and how to improve my work. The critique taught me that I needed to guide the viewers along while watching my film instead of looking at it from a distance (which made the film seem impersonal at times). Overall I was satisfied with my work. My thoughts after the critique made me wish that I worked on better transitions. I also wanted the message to be clearer and less confusing to the viewers. I know next time what to do and what to improve on to better my work.