Critique 1 Reflection - Hattie Mallot

My piece was more well received than I thought it would be. And I was surprised that people got pretty close to what my piece was talking about. I would have thought the pacing of my video would be critiqued, but I guess it wasnt really of note. I also thought that my shots might bother people since there were times when the picture I was drawing wasn't visible, but people seemed to like my over-the-shoulder shot as it added a human touch. If I were to do this project again, I would take into mind the style of the drawing itself, the amount of space taken up on the paper, the rest of the body of the drawing, and the realism of the process portrayed in the video.